Competition: SRI Project #3 - Week 1 - Command and Conquer

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SRI Project #3 - Week 1 - Command and Conquer

Command and Conquer

The SRI is beginning to build its paramilitary forces and has had a Battalion command staff assigned officially to the organization. But, before the commander and the rest of his staff can get to work they need identities. First and foremost this unit needs a commanding officer. Start fleshing out this new character by submitting a mini-profile using the factors below:

  • Name
  • Race
  • Gender
  • Physical Description (height, weight, eye color, hair color, etc) - 150 word maximum.
  • Character History - 250 word maximum.

Scoring

Scoring will be done using the following weighting with each factor being score individually from 1 to 5:

  • Creativity - 40%
  • Realism - 30%
  • SRI Mission Fit - 20%
  • Spelling/Grammar - 10%

Rules

  • Preferred submission formats are text box, pdf, doc or rtf. No links to outside documents please.
  • The winning entry will be used in the creation of this SRI canon NPC.
Competition Information
Parent Competition
SRI Research Project #3: Onward and Upward
Organized by
Raiheaux
Running time
2018-06-03 until 2018-06-09 (7 days)
Target Unit
Clan Taldryan
Competition Type
Other
Awards
Third Level Crescents
Participants
5 subscribers, of which 4 have participated.
Results
1st place
Lord Halcyon
Member
Lord Halcyon
Textual submission

Name: Sorqa Buuk
Race: Weequay
Gender: Male

Physical Description: Standing at 2 metres in height, Sorqa Buk is on the taller side for a Weequay, and easily standing above many of those that the deals with. He seems even taller due to his thin frame, with clothing concealing the wiry musculature of his body. His leathery skin was a dark yellow colour, almost a light brown, coarsely textured. His head is kept completely hairless, with no adornments to speak of. His eyes, nearly black in colour, never seem to blink from their sunken holes. His face is nearly always expressionless, the only expressions only being variations of general annoyance at anyone or anything around him.

Character History: Sorqa Buk has had a long history with the Taldryan Military, having served a number of years as part of the main security force on Karufr. His time prior to coming to Karufr has never been explained, but he was a teenager when he first came to the Kr'Tal system. His skill, both with melee and small-arms weapons, caught the attention of Taldryan's Special Forces when he joined the Taldryan Army. He was immediately put into Special Forces training, excelling in the harsh regiment, and assigned to one of the specilazed squads. He eventually became Squad Leader, before being recruited by Taldryan's Secret Intelligence Service to act as the head of the Perlemian Cell. Sorqa had shown an affinity for adaptability, and due to his species he would easily be able to blend in and not be noticed, as most Weequays were taken to be hired thugs. During the attack on Karufr, Sorqa attempted to find allies to help Taldryan. Due to the changes in the Taldryan leadership, much of the Intelligence Branch documents were lost. However, the current leadership has begun reaching out to past contacts, and Sorqa has returned to Taldryan. With his skill set and experiences in the seedier side of the galaxy, he has been chosen to help lead a new Battalion focused on helping and protect the SRI

Placement
1st place
2nd place
Kaz Raith
Member
Kaz Raith
File submission
Helen_Beck.pdf
Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Rian Taldrya
Member
Rian Taldrya
File submission
SRI_Project__3_-_Week_1_-_Command_and_Conquer.pdf
Textual submission

Headshot taken from: https://www.pinterest.co.uk/pin/99219998024218456/?lp=true

Placement
3rd place
Member
A deleted dossier
Textual submission

Name: Mobatt Sram
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Physical Description: Sporting short black hair and brown eyes, Mobatt Sram has the solid, muscular build of a career soldier. With a height of 5'11" and a weight of 180lb, Sram is able to blend into a crowd with relative ease.
History: Mobatt Sram is a veteran of the Taldryan army. Graduating from the former military academy on Karufr, Sram specialised in urban combat and infiltration, and was assigned to a unit operating in the city of Dragostae. After many years of quietly carrying out his duties, earning the rank of Captain, Sram was patrolling part of the city's Industrial Sector when the Suffering began to attack the planet. Sram, using his knowledge of the city, managed to survive and find his way to an evacuation ship.
Since the attack on Karufr, he has often worked with Andrelious J. Mimosa-Inahj, who has found Sram's skillset to be extremely useful when performing field work for the SRI.

Placement
No placement
Member
Raistline Taldrya Majere
File submission
briar.pdf
Placement
No placement